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We really need a extreme make over for room 17’s courtyard, there a many reasons for this.

Room17’s courtyard is very ugly and nasty because the drain is got a lot of mud in it and the drinking fountain is got grass all over it. Also the concrete is rough.

Nobody plays here because there is nothing to do and there is hardly no one is never playing here so we might have to entice then to come.

We surveyed to find out what do people think about what we put in the courtyard. We do not have enough play areas because the fields are closed and the breeze is full of kids
that a playing cards. It just a waste of space so we need a bigger area and a lot more playing things so that kids could entice room 17’s could. The field a only closed.


This will be a good idea to get more play things so kids could come and play in our courtyard.