Thursday, November 28, 2013

Writing Sample

Set in a dark hall with no lights.

Problem: Andrea passed away 8 years ago. Marley (Andrea’s husband) had left her and married
an old nasty which thats evil and poor.

It was Tuesday 9th of October 1997 1am in the morning when it was time for me to get up and wait for Andreas mum and dad to arrive back home. Marley and I playing hide and clap in the darkness made uncle TeRina and I scared

Paragraph 1: Marley is an 18 year old boy who really loved to sing and play instruments, Marley had married an old lady named Andrea who also liked to muck around and loved visiting scary cemeteries. On Marleys 16th birthday Andrea’s uncle TeRina had found Andrea dead in our church hall.

Paragraph 2: TeRina quickly called the ambulance and texted Marley to come. As Marley arrived he saw his wife lying on the stage, as Marley walked towards her TeRina saw tears dripping down his face. We saw the ambulance trying to open the door, so I sprinted towards the door and quickly opened it the ambulance ran to Andrea and tried CPR on her but it was too late.

Paragraph 3: Two years later Marley had left Andrea and went to an evil witch named Ceece, Ceece was poor and an nasty lady who really wanted to kill people. Ceece had found out that Andreas father was Matthew so she tried to kill him but she couldn’t because Andreas mother (Jorja) kept on sticking with her.


Title:  Two Giraffes came through my window

The sky full of clouds. throughout the evening I started setting the table for my customers. My friend was helping me set the table. Kate was drooling while I was serving the delicious food on the table. Scooping the ice cream out for the dessert made my fingers frozen as ice.

Sweat running down my face because of the hot sun. I walked over to the window and opened it to let that fresh breeze in. I quickly walked up stairs to wash my hands, I heard three knocks on the door. “My customers are here Kate get ready” I shouted.

Just before I opened the door for my customers I quickly wiped my sweat. Kate power walked towards the door and introduced her self to our guests. We quickly took them to their table. “Would you like to order anything else” Kate asked the guests “No thanks, this would be enough” the guests replied.

As they were eating Kate and I were on our break and when we came back inside we got a fright because we saw two giraffes poking their head through the window, getting ready to eat our guests food. “ My guests please get out this is argent!” Kate screamed to the guests so then my customers took their food and dessert with them.

My first day at school ;)

While me and mum were walking to school I felt strange things floating in my stomach as well as being nervous. As my mum and I were waiting for the office ladies (Ms Flavell and Ms Jarmen) I was happy and as well as nervous and quiet that I was going to start school. When Miss Flavell led my mum and I to my new class I was jumping up and down.

I meet my new teacher, her name was Miss Lal she was talking with my mum while I was meeting up with my new mates Serena and Malae’tea. Before the school bell rang me and my mates went for walk to check out our brand new school.

As the bell was ringing I quickly sat down and asked my teacher Miss Lal what was that bell for morning tea sweetie she replied. My classmates and I were told to get our lunch and sit down on the deck. While I was sitting alone on the stairs Maru and Malaete’a asked me if i wanted to play with them then I said sure why not.