Title: The most mysterious night ever
Orientation
Who: Caroline and Mary
When: At night time
Where: Walking back from the cinemas
BEGINNING: COMPLICATION/PROBLEM
When the movie (SAW) finished Mary dropped me off home. And when she was walking she saw 5 drunk people acting crazy so then she saw the Cemetery then she ran through there but then she accidentally stood on one off the graveyards then an old lady came up and held Marys hand tight then Marys face turned red and one eyeball came out and she had no way out cause she had only one eyeball left.
RESOLUTION: HOW THE PROBLEM IS SOLVED
Luckily Mary found her way home so then she was running all over the place but then her mum saw her and called out to her “My daughter Mary over here” then her mum came and dragged her home and called the ambulance and when they arrived they saw her eye then they got scared but they still had to do their job fix her eye so they went back to the Cemetery and got her eyeball and put it back on.
ENDING: WHAT HAS COME FROM THE EXPERIENCE
So then Mary would never believe in herself to walk home all alone so whenever she goes somewhere she ask her older sister to go with her.
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